edit to elevate
in the whirlwind of life
unafraid of swirling current
tossed into air
with open arms
she gives herself over
to the winnowing
and lets the chaff fall where it will
I wrote the post before this one earlier in the day and before I saw the prompt for Poets United.
I think they go together rather well so I revisited my earlier words and severely edited to get more
rhythmic and succinct words
feel free to critique if you would like.