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Monday, 21 April 2014

21 April





together they were nothing but a mess of sharp aches

 rocking on that bridge

smokin' a bone

limbs open

swaying in the breeze


steal  away up here 

to watch those troubles slip away below them

like dirty water down the kitchen sink


you don't gotta tell them twice


3 comments:

  1. steal away up here
    to watch those troubles
    slip away below them

    Take a peek, one might learn a few things. More apparent when one reflects on it! Nicely asos!

    Hank

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  2. I loved the way I could picture the scene so well from your words.

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  3. Yeah, I really like the way you made this look simple, and this great ending - to watch those troubles slip away below them like dirty water down the kitchen sink you don't gotta tell them twice. Nicely!

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