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Monday, 11 November 2013

11 November



an ordinary morning




humming Julia in the sunny kitchen
with you
 an instant of dignity in the morning drill

i wonder where the years have gone

you are the star i use to navigate my visions
yours is the stride i use to measure what we gain

late morning light streams  though the window
 and I buckle under the grace

humming Julia in the sunny kitchen

with you









19 comments:

  1. What a comfortable feel this poem has about a lasting loving relationship.

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  2. i buckle under the grace...what a cool li ne that...if i was to buckle under something, grace would be it...smiles. it is a beautiful love story...

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  3. Your words tell a beautiful story. Humming in the kitchen is wonderful. xo

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  4. you are the star i use to navigate my visions
    yours is the stride i use to measure what we gain~ such beautiful lines! Sounds like a wonderful relationship that inspired these words!

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  5. This is always beauty to be found in those ordinary mornings....if one looks for it!

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  6. I was listening to that song just yesterday. Funny how we can magnify those little moments, almost freezing time so we can notice them more closely.

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  7. wow!! beautiful!! extra ordinarily...:)

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  8. Serenity prevails in your poem, found in the repetition of these ordinary mornings shared with someone we love. Lovely!

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  9. so nicely expressed........'you are the star i use to navigate my visions'..my favorite line

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  10. A very sweet write. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  11. This is WONDERFUL......what a blessing to have moments like this. Love it!

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  12. This could be a romantic relationship or one of a parent and child. It is delightful in its profound simplicity.

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  13. a kind of love that does not barter....lovely visions that last and last....extraordinary in the ordinary light

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  14. Yes a very comforting piece..can feel all those ruminations as 'you' contendly be in the kitchen..

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Deep peace of the running wave to you.
Deep peace of the flowing air to you.
Deep peace of the quiet earth to you.
Deep peace of the shining stars to you.
Deep peace of the gentle night to you.
Moon and stars pour their healing light on you

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